someone slashed my moorings
while I looked out to sea
now I am adrift in salty waters
or perhaps:
I neglected the ropes
securing me to the shore
until they frayed and snapped
and I was loosed among rough waves
***
someone robbed the wind from my sails
while I looked out to sea
now I am left stranded in the doldrums
or perhaps:
I forgot to paddle
hoping someone else would row
Until all motion ceased
And I was stuck far off my course
***
someone let me drown
while I looked out to sea
now I am interred in brine forever
or perhaps:
I ignored the waves
lapping at my ankles
until it was too late
and I was swallowed whole
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Well, at least there’s not sharks…
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I love the tension between verses. This makes the structure very playful!
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This is so good, Cyn! I love it!
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I like the presence of mind in your poem, Cyn. It’s one thing to blame everything on yourself or on anyone else; it’s another thing to be present enough in the situations to see both sides.
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I like this. It is very well written.
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Great poem: the structure, the precise words, the tension in opposition, the universality of its message. Such skill you have. You so often write for all of us, capture what we have felt but never expressed.
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I am not a huge fan of poetry but this one I really connected with. I just wanted to shout “Yes!” when I read it. Accountability!! But topic aside, great choice of words throughout…like “neglected” and “robbed”…perfect choices to convey the ideas of blame and accountability. Really liked this!
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I’m glad that the fact it was in verse didn’t stop you from reading it. Thanks!
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